Hello! I like the one with the tower also, I thing that is a very interesting approach to your logo design. I like how you made it look like the flames from the olympic's torch, very creative, my advise to you though would be to play a little bit more with the type.
I like tower one with the second type suggested for contrast. Also, very creative with the rings btw, but #1 would also be cool with the horizontal type though. Good job with the rings though.
If you choose to go with the rings: I like the type on the first one but the rings from 2 and 3. The adds to the concept very well. I would create more space between the type and the logo though...it looks a little squished right now.
If you choose to go with the tower: you did a wonderful job rendering this. It is uniquely stylized and I love the what the sun adds to it.
Overall, I think the tower would be most representative of the country which is what the olympic logo is about. But the creativeness of the rings is well rendered too.
I like the playfulness of the type in your fourth design (first on the right). I think it works nicely with the rings. I would probably drop the underline though as it will be hard to see what that is when your design is shrunken down. I also really like the tower- I think that is a great stylized look but I think you would still need the rings and I would experiment with type more. Maybe the type from the fourth design would work to make the tower into one cohesive design instead of image-type-rings.
The forth one from the top right is I think the strongest one from your designs. It is lively and playful. It is also nice that you adjusted the type and the logo mark to create a shape that resembles the Olympic torch. The only thing I suggest is that you should add colors to the type.
sorry, im not in your group , but i really like the bottom logo. The icon is almost there. All you have to do is have a little variety of spacing in between the shapes if the icon.
The one in the middle is strong to me... I like the incorporation of the obelisk and the sun thats featured on the flag. Although the one on the far right is cool the way it kind of comes together towards the bottom, so I would choose between those two, but the tower one is very strong.
My favorite is the one with the tower but in think that the type doesn't feel like buenos aires. Some of your type in the other logos are alot better and I think if you combined those with the tower you would have a winner.
I really like tower design as well as the rings on top.... i would say they are both strong designs... but i would pick the tower one as it looks strong and has life in it.. but as far as typefaces i would get a thick one like the ones on the circles... those look more appropriate and spanish.... good job though...
it works better without the underline in the characters of a few and contrary to others i find the tower design static. it may be still usable if the type was more refined. perhaps its the combination of vibrant stylized type with the tower design, but there is something about the top set i find more energetic and more original
I like the tower one, but you still have to have the rings in it. Maybe try a lighter version of that font, it seems a little thick.
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Hello! I like the one with the tower also, I thing that is a very interesting approach to your logo design. I like how you made it look like the flames from the olympic's torch, very creative, my advise to you though would be to play a little bit more with the type.
ReplyDeleteI like tower one with the second type suggested for contrast. Also, very creative with the rings btw, but #1 would also be cool with the horizontal type though. Good job with the rings though.
ReplyDeleteShant B.
If you choose to go with the rings: I like the type on the first one but the rings from 2 and 3. The adds to the concept very well. I would create more space between the type and the logo though...it looks a little squished right now.
ReplyDeleteIf you choose to go with the tower: you did a wonderful job rendering this. It is uniquely stylized and I love the what the sun adds to it.
Overall, I think the tower would be most representative of the country which is what the olympic logo is about. But the creativeness of the rings is well rendered too.
Great job!
-Kimberly Jensen
I like the playfulness of the type in your fourth design (first on the right). I think it works nicely with the rings. I would probably drop the underline though as it will be hard to see what that is when your design is shrunken down. I also really like the tower- I think that is a great stylized look but I think you would still need the rings and I would experiment with type more. Maybe the type from the fourth design would work to make the tower into one cohesive design instead of image-type-rings.
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Erin C.
The forth one from the top right is I think the strongest one from your designs. It is lively and playful. It is also nice that you adjusted the type and the logo mark to create a shape that resembles the Olympic torch. The only thing I suggest is that you should add colors to the type.
ReplyDeletesorry, im not in your group , but i really like the bottom logo. The icon is almost there. All you have to do is have a little variety of spacing in between the shapes if the icon.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely the one in the center. It is a great design. The only thing I would change is the typeface. I would try a serifed type.
ReplyDeleteJenn Chafin
The one in the middle is strong to me... I like the incorporation of the obelisk and the sun thats featured on the flag. Although the one on the far right is cool the way it kind of comes together towards the bottom, so I would choose between those two, but the tower one is very strong.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite is the one with the tower but in think that the type doesn't feel like buenos aires. Some of your type in the other logos are alot better and I think if you combined those with the tower you would have a winner.
ReplyDeleteTOWER but you need to find a new type.
ReplyDeleteI really like tower design as well as the rings on top.... i would say they are both strong designs... but i would pick the tower one as it looks strong and has life in it.. but as far as typefaces i would get a thick one like the ones on the circles... those look more appropriate and spanish.... good job though...
ReplyDeleteGregory S.
I like the tower design also. Ya maybe a little thicker font would work well too.
ReplyDeleteit works better without the underline in the characters of a few and contrary to others i find the tower design static. it may be still usable if the type was more refined. perhaps its the combination of vibrant stylized type with the tower design, but there is something about the top set i find more energetic and more original
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