#4 is clean with good type placement. Matching the "Fashion" color to the dress is a nice accent. I would leave the floral pattern a light gray to make it recede into the overall design rather than being prominent. The mouse thread and needle add dynamic motion but the mouse looks too rigid. Try to update the look of the mouse to complement your elegant design.
Lookin' good! I like 2 & 4, maybe you could mix them. Like have the arms and upper body of 2 and then the midsection and the mouse swinging off like in 4. I like the floral decorations you have in the back, looks girly and fashion like.
yep, 4. the others are too sketchy. 4 is very elegant and artsy at the same time. looks kind of like art projects magazine. the concept is also great with the mouse and needle. but i think the mouse needs a little work. im only concerned about the logo. fashion is in a nice green, but i wonder if the black pro is overpowering it. maybe the fashion is alittle darker or that is where the varnish is. godd job though.
I like #2 and #3 because those are the ones that look like they are working, however I did like the mouse idea and the computer mouse on #4 blends in well with what you are trying to do overall. One of the only problems is I liked the colorized manican yet it looks like it doesn't work well with the mouse idea, so if you can try to incorporate those two designs better. The floral pattern looks good as well but if you were going to choose the floral pattern lighten the opacity(#4) or like the opacity in #6.
I like #1 but add your vine element to it in a light shade of green in the bottom left corner or how you have it in #6. Overall I think those simple adjust would help to establish a good piece. The posterize looks are not working for me. I like the illustrated versions better. I would fine turn your curves in the breast area. Good job. Good luck. Kim Jensen
I think all of these are very solid designs and great ideas. They communicate exactly what the software is about while still being clean and elegant. Number 1, 3 and 4 are my favorites because they have good color and a nice stylistic quality to them. Great job!
I like number 4 with the thread/cord wrapping around the waste. I like how the color matches the dress in the logo as well. I think I kind of like the flower design higher up like in number 3, but overall it's looking great.
No.2 and 4 work best. I don't think you need the dotted line in No.4, though. It's hard to read "Fashion." You should use a different font (sans-serif) or make the dots smaller and darker??? I dunno, it's just hard to read because it is too light.
I really like the fourth one where the cords wrap around the waist. Maybe you could soften up the lines, because the black seems to stand out a little too much against the soft green
3 and 6 mouse is campy, cheesy, and not everybody uses a mouse. maybe i would like #4 if that wasnt there. color of type may be too light on a few. or do not use the stroke/thread thing on the type.
image quality needs work, but i am assuming it will get better. good layout and arrangement of elements, you just need to fine tune individual parts.
I like 1 or 4. They're pretty nice, but the first one is so light that it's hard to see. Maybe if you made it more sharp like the 6th one? The first feels kind of empty though on the left. The 4th may be a little better than the first in that regard.
I love number three, i like the use of color and the creativity in which you developed the entire design, I also like number 4 very much! it is clean and well done. I like how you used the color and also the gradient which makes the dress more real and great! nice job!
#4 is clean with good type placement. Matching the "Fashion" color to the dress is a nice accent. I would leave the floral pattern a light gray to make it recede into the overall design rather than being prominent. The mouse thread and needle add dynamic motion but the mouse looks too rigid. Try to update the look of the mouse to complement your elegant design.
ReplyDeleteLookin' good! I like 2 & 4, maybe you could mix them. Like have the arms and upper body of 2 and then the midsection and the mouse swinging off like in 4. I like the floral decorations you have in the back, looks girly and fashion like.
ReplyDeleteyep, 4. the others are too sketchy. 4 is very elegant and artsy at the same time. looks kind of like art projects magazine. the concept is also great with the mouse and needle. but i think the mouse needs a little work. im only concerned about the logo. fashion is in a nice green, but i wonder if the black pro is overpowering it. maybe the fashion is alittle darker or that is where the varnish is. godd job though.
ReplyDeleteI like #2 and #3 because those are the ones that look like they are working, however I did like the mouse idea and the computer mouse on #4 blends in well with what you are trying to do overall. One of the only problems is I liked the colorized manican yet it looks like it doesn't work well with the mouse idea, so if you can try to incorporate those two designs better. The floral pattern looks good as well but if you were going to choose the floral pattern lighten the opacity(#4) or like the opacity in #6.
ReplyDeleteI like #1 but add your vine element to it in a light shade of green in the bottom left corner or how you have it in #6. Overall I think those simple adjust would help to establish a good piece. The posterize looks are not working for me. I like the illustrated versions better. I would fine turn your curves in the breast area.
ReplyDeleteGood job. Good luck.
Kim Jensen
I think all of these are very solid designs and great ideas. They communicate exactly what the software is about while still being clean and elegant. Number 1, 3 and 4 are my favorites because they have good color and a nice stylistic quality to them. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like number 4 with the thread/cord wrapping around the waste. I like how the color matches the dress in the logo as well. I think I kind of like the flower design higher up like in number 3, but overall it's looking great.
ReplyDeleteNo.2 and 4 work best. I don't think you need the dotted line in No.4, though. It's hard to read "Fashion." You should use a different font (sans-serif) or make the dots smaller and darker??? I dunno, it's just hard to read because it is too light.
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I really like the fourth one where the cords wrap around the waist. Maybe you could soften up the lines, because the black seems to stand out a little too much against the soft green
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ReplyDeletemouse is campy, cheesy, and not everybody uses a mouse. maybe i would like #4 if that wasnt there. color of type may be too light on a few. or do not use the stroke/thread thing on the type.
image quality needs work, but i am assuming it will get better. good layout and arrangement of elements, you just need to fine tune individual parts.
I like 1 or 4. They're pretty nice, but the first one is so light that it's hard to see. Maybe if you made it more sharp like the 6th one? The first feels kind of empty though on the left. The 4th may be a little better than the first in that regard.
ReplyDeleteI love number three, i like the use of color and the creativity in which you developed the entire design, I also like number 4 very much! it is clean and well done. I like how you used the color and also the gradient which makes the dress more real and great! nice job!
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